Written by Helen Jackson.
Well, we've had an interesting few days! This morning we recorded the soundtrack for episode 3. Jane Atkins (viola), Su-a Lee (cello) and Alison Mitchell (flute) joined composer Michael Ferguson at the University of Edinburgh's music department. The recording went well and the music sounds fantastic - Michael did a great job and the players, as always, were amazing.
Less usual, though: Adam and I heard the ending of the music for the first time at the recording session!
As you know, Michael's been working over the weekend. On Sunday afternoon, he gave us a final draft of the music. We watched it with the rough animation... and decided it didn't work. Not the music, but the story.
At the end of the episode we have a taxi chase. Watson follows Otto Dafé's scent and alerts Aileen. Aileen and Lyn then need to rush out of the cafe, hail a taxi, and yell "follow that cab!" in true Hollywood style. We'd compressed this action to make it really snappy - one moment they're in the cafe, the next a cab's pulling up.
But, then we made a big mistake.
We knew that Aileen would love saying "follow that cab!". We also knew that Watson would be exasperated that she was joking around. We created a scene where Aileen and Lyn decide to say "follow that cab!" together, then fall about laughing, while poor Watson rolls his eyes in disgust (you can watch this in the animation rough).
All fine... except that it took all the pace out of the episode. As soon as we saw it with music, we realised that the jokey ending was a problem. The episode should end with a sense of urgency: Aileen is chasing the bad guy, after all.
So, what to do?!
We cut the last scene. Instead, the episode will end with Aileen's taxi drawing away from the kerb, seen from above, as she says "follow that cab!". No laughter, no response from Watson. A straightforward cliffhanger ending.
It's much better. But, it meant Michael had to re-work his music last night. He was working until 2am, as he needed to get the parts finished for the players (thanks, Michael!). And, there was no time for us to review the music before the recording - which is why it came as a suprise to us this morning. A really good surprise, I hasten to add. It sounds brilliant.
Frustratingly, the taxi scene was was the first to be rendered (generated by the computer - still frames below) so we're throwing away our only completed scene. But, it was the right decision.
The moral? The story has to work. If it doesn't, it has to change. It's better if this can be thrashed out at the storyboard stage (that's what storyboards and animatics are for), but sometimes difficult late decisions have to be taken.